So cute! And so simple.
Cool idea but you can't quite recognize the writing. it'd be easier to read if you'd put the supplies closer together
Yeah your right, the whole time I didn't know why it would not read out right, if I made the material closer on the "R" and the top of the "A" closer it would be more recognizable. Thanks for the help.
It's a nice and simple idea but it's a little too detailed i guess... If all the lines and text were more bold it would look better and be easier to read, I think. The dot on the i is also a little confusing because all the other letters are capital letters. Also the bow things (or what ist that supposed to be? it's not quite clear) are a little too many and the cloudy background looks kinda muddy. For a tshirt ist better to have clean borders ad maybe just a white outline around it.
Yah I kind of agree (pretty harsh -_-) & my lines are pretty thick :/ art is not always clean xD haha my first time actually doing a digital hand font xD pretty new at this digital thing :) good luck :3 and thank you xD
The face is a little distorted (probably because the head is tilted a little)
You can avoid that distortion by flipping the image. It really helps to recognize minor mistakes like distortion and art lean. The values and the contrast are very nice, though and I also like how the brushstrokes are still visible.
Thanks for the nice words :) I actually know this trick and use it multiple times while drawing and this time I even put the photo on a layer above it to find why it looks this way it has something to do with the eyes so I am going to practice that and the rest is kind of just her face, but I really thank you for your critique! I know I still have a long way to go.
Wow, that is some cool demon!
I really do like the color scheme with the complimentary colors, well done! Maybe the fire in his hand could reflect a bit more on his face, body and surroundings, that would make the flame look brighter and give the image a little more contrast, I belive.
It would make it more interesting to look at. To achieve a brighter flame and therefore a more vivid result, I would suggest working with the "color dodge" mode and making everything except the flame a little darker.
Btw, the tiny rats on the floor are so cute!
Thank you for your inputs, but all your suggestions are based on your taste for color, and I think that color choice is purely subjective thing.
The fire is not the main focus, the values are correct and in this lighting situation, it is very unlikely that the fire would be reflected on his body, because the light from above is stronger
Very cute design! Maybe it would look better in a higher resolution, or go full pixel art!
i suck at pixel art
Looks great! Coloring is very good, but the pose could be a little mor dynamic and less stiff, though.
Hehehe ok, thanks for your comment :D
The armor looks really really cool, I love the color combination of the warm gold tones and the cool silver, that gives it a lot of contrast and makes it stand out. Also the stripes on the arms which are matching the tail look really good.
The bright pink accents in eyes, nose an fur and the glowing weapon look nice as a contrast to the fur and armor.
You could work a little on the anatomy, to be honest, but I like the color choices.
Thanks. One thing I've been told on scifi armor coloring is to limit the number of different colors.
Keeping it mainly gold and silver/white was based on that rule or concept.
It's true I could always improve how I construct anatomy. This styling blends a little anime style proportions with a little toonieness and a little realism. One thing done in anime style I didn't do here is add length to the heels. It can be tricky to add the right amount of heel length.
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